16/02/2016

Editing Assignment






1.      Joshua was scratching his head with his lawnmower broken he didnt know how hed get the yard ready in time for the barbecue.
2.      Our cat lost its caller again, I dont know how he keeps loosing so many collers. I guess that animal are just a reel looser.
3.      I heard the story about the mysterious girls disappearance from Remais party from her friends sisters Twitter post, she got the facts from her aunts dogs vetrinarians neighbour who heard it from a guy who know’s someone who was there so obviously its true.
4.        Brandon* would of arrived to class on time; but he was checking the horde of paper clip’s he keeps in his locker. Its an odd thing to have, but everyone needs a hobby LOL

*Or "Mitchell" if you are in the afternoon class.
 
B: Combine into one sentence.
“Don’t Stop Believing” was a hit.
It was a hit in the 1980s.
The show, The Sopranos, used it in the final episode.
This use resulted in a revival of the song’s popularity.